Music video pitch (Are you gonna be my girl)

Idea for music video

My song I wanted to do was jet are you gonna be my girl as it’s a upbeat rock song The general idea was that the two guitarist would compete for the love of a girl by taking her on dates but on each date either of the guitarist would be better at the date. For example being in a cinema and where one of the guitarists would be eating all of the popcorn and laughing at the film whereas the other would be romantic like putting his arm round her etc. The girl would be the audience so it would be filmed in point of view which involves the audience, I got the idea from the one direction video of night changes as that is filmed in point of view and I think it is very successful
 

I got the idea of the two guitarist competeing from the film this means war . however unlike the film niether of the guitars get the girl as the singer wins her over in the guitar solo battle between the two.





my idea was very basic and could have been improved and the point of view shots would have beeen hard to maintain throughout themusic video , which is one of the reasons why my idea wasnt picked out of the group.